Tonight as I gazed into
My mirrored eyes
I saw in my reflection
The shape of my skull
Beneath the flesh, and
I saw the pattern
Of my life, and
Perceived the rhythm
Underlying the flow
Of my days.
Perhaps I have gained
A newer perspective
As the years have passed by
Or perhaps I have simply
Learned to recognize
The threads of the patterns,
But whichever way the truth lies
I will follow to the very end.
Deep in the night
The church bell tolls and
Someday it will toll for me


So very beautiful and haunting. Keep at following those threads and looking at your gorgeous visage in the mirror. There is the wisdom of the world there. I love you. -H
Thanks, Heather. Just want to say I’m exploring a theme here, and am actually in a very good mood. If you play your cards right, I might let you be President of my fan club. Love you, too!
I hate to tell you, I proclaimed myself president of your fan club long ago. There are more members than you know! I am an incredibly diligent chick when it comes to love! And, yay for good moods. Mwah!
wow, take all the words written above and they all ring loud and true. And all I’m left with is wow
Wow works for me. I tried to leave a comment on your poem, but the comments were closed. It was beautiful, powerful, painful and it broke my heart!
it’s beautiful and deep
Thank you!
I don’t think anyone does soul searching as pretty as you!
Thank you, Angie. It’s all in the pictures!
I find I love the maturity and wealth of living I have experienced … however, I find I cannot accept I am older and fight it tooth-and-nail. I’ll Never grow up!
Nice to read the way you express yourself. You grow more eloquent by the minute.
I’m still only 23, just with lots and lots of experience. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks.
It has deep meaning but I can feel the energy, I love it!
Zero Dramas
Thank you. I’m always interested in the reactions I get to my writing. They can be so varied and so revealing!
Very deep and touching poem. It will definitely be interesting to see what happens when the church bell tolls. Hm.
Alex, thank you. Yes, it will be interesting. Part of me is in no hurry, but part of me can hardly wait!
Yes it may toll some day………..but then again with a little bit of bloomin’ luck, I won’t be there to hear it. Great post.
Neil, I like your attitude! Thanks for liking my post.