I wait for the bus that will take me downtown,
Where I’ll hop on the train to my destination.
We turn a corner and I see a row of green trees,
With their tops going up in flames.
Like torches that burn in the daylight
And are quenched by the fall of night.
Oranges and greens, greens and golds and reds,
This living, breathing, moving panoply of color
Thrills me. Each tree is like a shout of glory
Against the pale blue backdrop of the Autumn sky.
No one else notices, no one bats an eye.
How can they be so blindly unaware of
All this beauty? The colors boldly strike my senses;
I am awed and dumbstruck, though inside
I’m shouting, “Look! Be aware of this wondrous
Miracle of beauty unfolding in front of
Your unseeing gaze.” But the words will not come,
And the moment passes, unnoticed and unremarked
But by me, and I scribble down these memories
While I have hold of them, and preserve them
For now.
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October 25, 2010 at 2:06 pm
I snapped a few amazing photos of the trees and their fallen leaves lying upon the green grass, just this weekend. The rustling of the leaves as I walk among them takes me back to when I was a young girl. I absolutely love Autumn. Sounds like we have the same feelings about this wonderful season. 😀
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October 30, 2010 at 11:07 am
@ Theresa H Hall Already, just a few days since I wrote this, a lot of the golden leaves have been blown away, and it makes the reds and oranges that much more vivid!
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October 26, 2010 at 12:43 am
I love early morning walks in autumn. The reds and oranges spread so much passion in the air that even the loneliness seems romantic!
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October 30, 2010 at 11:06 am
@safyah (SZU) I wait for the trees’ annual display every year. The colors are so intense!
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October 28, 2010 at 5:39 am
i like ur writing style 🙂
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October 30, 2010 at 11:01 am
Thank you. All compliments gratefully accepted.
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October 29, 2010 at 7:29 pm
Oh Gee another one to make me never attempt writing poetry again. I know when I’ out classed in a field of flowers.
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October 30, 2010 at 10:59 am
@thesandman You’re so funny, and you’re also one of my favorite poets! Thanks for the lovely compliment.
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October 30, 2010 at 1:43 am
I enjoyed that thanks
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October 30, 2010 at 11:12 am
@Chris I’m so glad you did, and that you stopped to say so. Thank you.
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December 2, 2010 at 5:47 am
I just want to share that I also love fall season.=) Thanks
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December 5, 2010 at 10:30 pm
Beautifully written poem. =)
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December 6, 2010 at 9:03 am
Thank you. Nothing inspires me like the autumn colors.
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